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Existence Ratified -
Author: Demon_99

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Hollow melody played on worn out strings
Fallen leaves of countless trees weeping
Rain falls softly on the bleak landscape
Mountains drowning in a obscured fog
Explosions deep inside forcing change
Frozen images locked in eternal motion
Beauty confined to random creations
Intrinsic flow of never-ending circumstances
Collapse from within the foundation of all things
Redundant cycles of constant inconsistencies

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 05:21 am

Hey Devil! lol

Demon_99! Boy, did this poem shine! I like that freestyle! In all seriousness, from the 1st line down to the 10th line, you've captured some great kodak photos in here.... From the nearly broken strings of a guitar, to the trees, needing some kleenex for their tears, and etc.... I am in awe when I read your MARVELOUS work!!! Keep it up, keep it up! Smiles, Meridian
Demon_99 (68.96.11.191) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 11:22 pm

Meri :)

Glad you liked it :) I tried to make the images grow in the imagination as you read it, so i am happy that it worked! It does me well to hear such kind words, thanks you. ~Demon~
Brett (205.214.208.66) -- Saturday, July 24 2004, 12:42 am

Demon...

This is an amazing piece of writing demon! You did an excellent job of creating images while reading the poem. It shows a truly artistic side of you which is incredible! Keep up the great work! -Brett
Demon_99 (68.96.11.191) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 05:12 am

Brett

Thanks for the comment, glad you liked it. :)
~Demon~
alyafirza2208 @ Liza (219.93.85.5) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 09:33 am

Awesome man..

Hey..man..i admit that i don't really interested in poems or anything related with it but after i read your excellent poem,i was impress with it.The way you creating a mood for each lines and got meaning behind it..It's so creative and artistic..Keep up the awesome work.-Liza :)
 
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