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I Hate
Author: Confused

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I hate people
I hate guys
I hate the truth
I hate the lies

I hate the talks behind my back
I hate the slaps in the face
I hate how preps make me feel
I hate how drugs put me in space

I hate heartbreak
I hate love
I hate attraction
I hate how its me you always shove

I hate you
I especially hate me
Im not worth anything
I hate how im still here when i should be hanging from a tree

I HATE EVERYTHING

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Tarna (4.226.171.1) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 09:37 am

"I Hate" poems

"I hate" poems are great releases for negativity. Though I don't really care for the end of the poem, It doent fit the flow of the rest of the poem. Nor do I care for thoughts of suicide in general, the rest of it is good till you get to that part
noelle (64.142.38.253) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 12:43 am

umm okay

wow u must be really depressed but i have to agree w/ Tarna the end was a liltle to much an u should look at th epositive things more then the negitive believe me it really helps but great w/ the rhyming!!!!
barb (209.112.22.238) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 01:40 am

wish I could help

Aall Ii can say is you are so wrapped up in hate.You won't be able to see what you love. Like your writing is a good way to get out the hatred. you are a good expressive writer. So just love writing and the good feelings will come. Never give up.
Ben franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 01:41 pm

Tarna and Noelle....

Tarna and noelle i see you dont care for the ending of this poem, this has come from a persons heart, confused please keep writing what comes from your heart and not to other peoples taste. -ben franklin p.s. dont do anything stupid. (snipped)
nila (195.93.33.14) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 03:06 am

mmmm the hate/love thing ehh

well they say there's a fine line between love and hate!!!try thinking of the good, even a small happy time in your life,there must be at least 1 time, think of that when times get tought, it really works,you should try it,my friend always said to me when i was down n the dumps,smile and the world smiles with ya,fart and your on yer own!!!1its a very true saying,
Kayla (67.8.56.225) -- Wednesday, October 18 2006, 09:54 pm

it will be okay

I know what your going through...ive been there. But suicide is not the answer..i promise you.
I understand you are depressed but hunny everything will soon be okay...when i was going through sumthing like this i had no other choice but to go and try and believe this person they all called god. When i did i started to pray "cause everyone said it would work" it took some time but eventually my prayers were answered...i think you should put your situation in gods hands...
god bless you girl and i hope everything turns out okay.
 
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