Within My Heart Beats by Paul Geurin

Every day I look forward to seeing you
You are my inspiration
Our Love is my obsession
To share my life with you is my dream .

I want to look into your beautiful brown eyes
and tell you how much I Love you every morning for the rest of my life .
I want to see your lovely smile before I start my days journey

I dream of one day holding you in my arms
all night long so that you'll feel my passion,
And know you hold the key to my heart.

Your beautiful face I want to touch. To hold you close,
To smell your heavenly sent.

I promise you,
Jennifer Noelle

I swear upon earth and heaven and to all that listen
To Love you forever
And never forget how much Love I feel for you

Jackie S (4.227.50.173) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 10:34 pm

Over and over again
Hi Paul, Though I have enjoyed all of your poems which on the most part are exceptional, I am really having problems reading them with the use of your girls name in all of them. It really gets old seeing it again and again in every poem. It also seems to break the flow of the reading. You can really notice it in this one. Maybe you could leave your declarations of love for the copies you give to her or in the author's notes.

Martin Vann (63.185.65.173) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 11:33 pm

Hey Paul, just back away, let her come to you.
Paul, Just some friendly advice, based upon "Experience", If, that means anything at all to you. I would think, she would know by now, how you feel. I think, if, you push too hard, you, will lose it all, but, hey, that is just my experience. You could save, your heartlot of pain, if you wait, see if, her love, comes back to you at all. Don't push, that is my advice, if, you back away, she may wonder why, then, she may come to you and ask why, that is the challenge that you want, right? Or, hey, did I suprise you with sound advice? What will you do Paul, if she comes to you, hey, that is up to you, i'm out of here, just think, about the advice. A Friend, -Martin V

Tarna (4.226.171.1) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 10:06 am

i like the writing...
but.... I seem to agree with what Jackie said too much personalization in your poety can take away from it. I find my self trying to read your work and leave out the girlfriends name and it does distract from the work. If not for that, I think all your work is outstanding. Seems like the deep intense feelings border on obsession be careful in your love devotions... beautiful work

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