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Can You Honestly?
Author: Terrie*

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can you feel
my tears ?
can you feel
me crying for you?
can you feel
how much I miss you?
can you feel
my everyday thoughts?
can you dry the tears
to my lonely heart?
can you blow me a kiss from afar?
and tell me everythings
going to be alright?
can you honestly?
can you feel
the pain that lives inside?
now tell me..
can you honestly?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.97.189) -- Saturday, July 24 2004, 12:17 am

Honestly

I can wipe away you're tears,
I can feel you're every thought,
I feel you're heart with every beat mine takes,
To kiss you like we do every day,
This I leave you as we part another night,
To tell you things will be alright,
I'll tell you that, that you know so well,
The pain inside is not a pain of hurt,
The pain you feel is that to be alive,
Great poem Terrie
You always write with feeling and love
Terrie* (65.135.86.64) -- Saturday, July 24 2004, 09:32 pm

Clive, where have you been darlin?

i have truely missed you.. your shared comments motivates me to write more lol and you hold me so highly upon a pedastol w/you heart.( some day you and i can write something together) i miss readin' your poetry..hugs/love
Tarna (4.226.171.1) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 09:03 am

stepping in...

someone elses shoes is always hard to do. I can feel the seperation of the the speaker and the person to whom this poem is directed. How many times we hear the words "I know how you feel" in this life when no one could possibly know how deep one thing can be from person to person ...for in that we are unique Good peice of work. I can feel the frustration
Terrie* (65.150.175.70) -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 10:56 pm

Tarna, to be far from one you love..

can cause so much pain good and bad, could you feel the tears that rolled off my heart, could you feel the lonliness,and the wale ing up it got from his one little kiss? God i am in love with a man that gives so much, but he lives so far away...thanx for your comment..
Terrie* (65.150.175.70) -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 10:58 pm

oops!!

"WAKING up it got from his one little kiss"
barb (66.103.63.60) -- Wednesday, June 8 2016, 03:26 am

very touching write thanks for sharing

Terrie you do realize that K I S S means Keep It Simple Stupid lol, just kidding Terrie. Your writing is very motivated to me,thank-you.
 
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