When The Nights Over
Author: Vampyr Tears
"This means nothing to you?" she stared at him.
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I'm not too sure what category this should go in...or if its really a poem. I just like it.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (22.214.171.124) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 08:28 pm|
Vampyr Tears! Hey there! You have some great forms of imagery used in this poem! The long necked bottle, their breath----cinnamon and vodka! That's good.....Glad their breath was refreshing, you know? LOL! Nice, way of writing a short creative story! Smiles, Meri
|LinzAy (126.96.36.199) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 11:00 pm|
There is something about this that draws you in. I like it:)
|Vampyr Tears (188.8.131.52) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 12:47 am|
Thank you so much. Your lovely comments put a smile on my face. Its nice to know people enjoy my work, I'll post some more stuff now. :)
|Tarna (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 08:47 am|
so little can put so much into your head.. This one can have so many possible background settings. But I tend to think of a bar room encounter... short and sweet and says so much great little short short story there.... with so much room to grow on
|Vampyr Tears (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 07:52 pm|
:) I'm so glad so many people like it. Maybe I'll have to add to it, or do something.
|Vampyr Lost In Love (18.104.22.168) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 05:08 am|
been there done that,it was kinda fun....but i don't regret things i have done but those i have not
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