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When The Nights Over
Author: Vampyr Tears

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"This means nothing to you?" she stared at him.
He shook his head and took another sip from the long necked bottle.
"You won't remember me at all?" Hope faded from her voice.
"Not really babe," he slurred, "But lets not think about tomorrow. Just now."
He leaned forward and their lips locked. The taste of cinnamin and vodka being exchanged.
"I'm going to hate you in the morning," she whispered.

------- Author's Notes -------

I'm not too sure what category this should go in...or if its really a poem. I just like it.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 08:28 pm

cool

Vampyr Tears! Hey there! You have some great forms of imagery used in this poem! The long necked bottle, their breath----cinnamon and vodka! That's good.....Glad their breath was refreshing, you know? LOL! Nice, way of writing a short creative story! Smiles, Meri
LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 11:00 pm

......

There is something about this that draws you in. I like it:)
Vampyr Tears (64.110.202.33) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 12:47 am

Thank you

Thank you so much. Your lovely comments put a smile on my face. Its nice to know people enjoy my work, I'll post some more stuff now. :)
Tarna (4.226.171.1) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 08:47 am

so little

so little can put so much into your head.. This one can have so many possible background settings. But I tend to think of a bar room encounter... short and sweet and says so much great little short short story there.... with so much room to grow on
Vampyr Tears (64.110.202.33) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 07:52 pm

Weeee

:) I'm so glad so many people like it. Maybe I'll have to add to it, or do something.
Vampyr Lost In Love (63.184.176.138) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 05:08 am

no need for a title

been there done that,it was kinda fun....but i don't regret things i have done but those i have not
 
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