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Sun
26 July, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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My day only truly begins after I hear your voice
Only then do I feel awoken
Only then can the day say it's hello that I will listen
The sun rises with you

And my day only truly ends after I hear your voice
Only then does my day feel complete
Only then can the night hold me that I will welcome it's embrace
The sun sets with you

Just as the sun lights the world
You do my soul
Just as then sun completes the day
You make me feel whole

...The day has it's sun...
...And I mine...

------- Author's Notes -------

How it feels being 800 miles away from that certain person. Only surviving by the strength of what you feel and a phone.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (4.226.171.1) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 09:26 am

The Sunrise

I can almost see a sunrise in heart as you hear his voice. Very picturesque..
LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 04:16 am

Tarna

:) thanks for the comment....I'm glad you could see the sunrise and set i feel everytime i hear his voice :)
 
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