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Just A Word
Author: Vampyr Tears

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I'm not going to tell you I love you
The emotion I feel is far beyond that
Its not pure and all too powerful
Definately not love, it just won't last
I won't miss you when your gone
I'll just crave you, I'll want your sweet taste in my mouth
To touch you, caress you roughly
Don't expect tenderness from me
Because once I've had you, my hunger will be satisfied
I'd be wrong to toss around such a word as love
When what I feel is truly lust

------- Author's Notes -------

I'm not to sure about the line "caress you roughly" I understand that its an oxymoron. When caress means to be gently and I've paired the word with roughly. But I thought it fit. I don't know...

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Tarna (4.226.171.1) -- Monday, July 26 2004, 08:36 am

ah lust....

a hunger that we all feel from time to time almost as if a beast is wanting out.... A nice rough caress can be really nice once in a while.. well written
 
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