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I Do
26 July, 2004
Author: ShyHeart

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They all see, you received, more flowers, today, this has been going on
For months and in the ladies room, they all say, she is nothing special
What is going on? Go, easy, on the other girls, remember once, you to
Said, “I Do.”

Remember when, you were just friends, then, you became lovers
Remember when, you would go to the movies, or go get a coke,
Just for fun. Remember when, you and he said “I Do,”
Then, the bills came in, the car was broke and the washing machine

Well, the world goes round, then you remember times, before you said “I Do.”
Now, you seem to wonder, what did that mean. The other girls, see,
Everyday, you get flowers. They all agree, you are a lone, what’s going on?
Nothing but your soul at night, to hold your lonely heart

Still, its driving them all crazy, you have no one, but every day
You get these flowers, and they all know, you are nothing special
Now, the other girls, start to rethink, their thoughts of you
Then most of all, they began to think, of those words, “I Do”

Now, back in the ladies room, they wonder, not about you,
But about themselves, you get all the flowers, yet, you are by yourself
Suddenly, the other girls, realize, when they, said, I do, they meant both words
I do, is not just for today, but, for all the tomorrow’s, that we share

They go home, they change their point of view, all because
Of all the flowers, I send to you, and remember, they all said
You, were nothing special, now they realize, they are special to
Love should never end, with the words, “I do.”

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, July 27 2004, 12:56 am

oh yeah

To have to hold, in sickness and health, til death do you part.... Does anyone in here feel that these two shouldn't be married? Ok then, you may kiss the bride...... OOOOO I can't wait for that day! I love the flowers, on down, to the woman and man looking into each other's eyes.... Truly fascinating! Smiles, Meri
Terrie* (65.141.106.22) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 05:57 pm

i always will...til the very end..

the flowers as special as they are..
i keep them alive in my heart..
i love the fragrance that lingers
beyond their days..
proof that love never goes away..

thank you for this poem..
romantic and breathtaking..
 
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