A Sad Good-bye
27 July, 2004
Author: Silent Voice
when a child cries,
you think of their father's eyes.
when a child sighs,
you think of their mother's lies.
but when a child dies,
the parents end all ties.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Tarna (4.227.50.61) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 02:59 am so sad sometimes. Thsi poem captures one of those moments well... |
| Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 07:29 am Both at the same time.... A sad good-bye, is a real good title to describe the grief of losing someone close to your heart.... It always leaves a cavity in my heart, when I lose someone dear.... Good job SV! Silent Voice! Smiles, Meridian |
| Sweet Sara (216.39.188.25) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 11:12 pm this poem is so short but soooo damn deep! its very sad indeed losin someone close. i liked this poem. it was nice |
| barb (209.112.22.25) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 02:56 am Ii know this happens and is sad but your writing is good and makes me happy that somebody else gets right to the point ,not just me, thank-you for your thoughts, short just like my attention span.Hha |
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