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It Can Be Hard
Author: WilTheThrill

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Its really hard to get up and move on,
wondering if your everymove is constantly wrong,
you second guess your placement,
and if you really belong.
Its hard to not get lost in deep thought,
when you think about them,
and you whole-heartedly wish,
that you could continue on without them,
the cost of time is only,
bitter icing on the cake,
it is truly amazing really
how much time it can take.
it can sometimes be hard,
to keep in mind what it means,
to live without the nightmares,
of having them in your dreams.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 06:31 am

rhyming

Terrific rhyming WilTheThrill! And the great part of it is that your poem hold a lot of truth, a lot of meaning to it... Wanting to move on, but can't, because your heart won't let you.... Nicely written Wil! Smiles, Meridian
Terrie* (65.136.6.193) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 03:03 pm

Wil , i am caught in your words...

and in your nightmares and dreams..i know them to well sometimes someone new won't do..
great writing..
*Emily* (24.176.153.185) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 04:00 pm

DANG!

Dang wil! that was awesome! and that's so sweet too! gah..u really have a lot of talent! maybe one day you'll right a poem book! lol! but anyway..that was great! way to go!
 
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