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I Think, I Saw You
27 July, 2004
Author: ShyHeart

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I think, I saw you, in my neighbor’s, garden
A little flower, greeting, the morning sun
Trying, to open up, just, not quite, awake
I felt my heart, flying, so high, above you

Felt, my love, warm you, as you, tried to speak
Felt, your beauty, trying, to share, something with me
Then, the sunshine, came over, both of us
You looked at me, and we both, begin to smile

I saw a Robin, in a nest, built for two
Heard a Blue-Jay, protecting her babies
I felt my heart, flying, so high over you
Felt the sunshine, and I think, you felt it to

Enough of this, I have to get to work
So, I must leave you, and your memory
Still, I hear the Blue-Jay, and the Robin
In its nest for two, then, again, I think, of you

I think, I saw you, in my neighbor’s garden

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (206.191.91.119) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 12:50 am

awe

This is so sweet you outdid yourself on this one Martin.can you tell I like emotional writing.:))
Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 07:26 am

pouring out

Just pouring out your heart.... Like barb said, truly emotional! I love the Blue-Jay and the Robin.... Brings out the significance of this delightful art work! Good going poetic man! Smiles, Meridian
Tammy (66.38.4.166) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 09:41 am

Martin Vann

I really loved this poem....It's so beautiful!!!
Martin Vann (63.25.149.205) -- Monday, January 24 2005, 04:13 pm

Thank You, You Are, The Flowers Of Love

Barb, Meridian & Tammy

As you know, we, Guys, do many things, but, none can come close, when we hold you in our arms, that is when, love begins to bloom, like, flowers bloom, in the spring.

MV
 
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