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I'm Tired Of...
Author: Brandi

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im tired of waiting
the girls you flirt with i always end up hating
soon im going to have a good many enemies
i'm tired of begging, im tired of thinking "please!"
i was living in a dream world
avoiding the thought you were with another girl
i always thought i had a chance with you
but now i know that when you hear my name you say simply, "who?"
Im tired of listening when people say "be patient"
you're never gonna see me, i may as well be absent
to me you seemed like the perfect guy
but no matter how hard i tried, i could never catch your eye
im tired of being jealous
and feeling so worthless
I guess i realized youre not worth it
it was a crime to like you, a crime i did commit
i was so in the clouds that i also didn't see the real you
im sure if everyone did see you the number of people who liked you would be few
you never treated me with respect
you thoguht i was a mere object
well im not, and i'm moving on
tm tired of waiting in a lane that isn't moving
so im switching lanes; changing

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ashley nb (12.222.12.163) -- Wednesday, June 18 2003, 10:39 pm

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grrreat! i liked it buddy, i stand up and applaud(however you spell it) you! good good, im glad youre getting over it. ive been there as you know. keep up the good work brandi!
Ems (152.163.252.103) -- Thursday, June 19 2003, 12:10 pm

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i loved it!! i agree w/ ash standing ovation!! its a good thing ur moving on..i dont really know who ur talkin about here....but yea!!! im here if ya need me!! nice job!
brandi (152.163.252.103) -- Thursday, June 19 2003, 09:16 pm

uhh...

thanks a lot u guys but i didnt think i did that great on this poem...it didnt come as easily as others. thanks though...u know can give criticism
Ems (205.188.208.170) -- Sunday, September 7 2003, 01:44 am

well..

well i liked it..so yea!! lol i do give criticism but i didnt feel like i needed to w/ this one!
mary (24.173.21.68) -- Wednesday, October 8 2003, 04:01 pm

Guys

That's good you move on. Their is going to be that great guy for you just wait and see, when you least expected you will have your soulmate.
Ashley G. (152.163.252.163) -- Friday, January 30 2004, 12:08 am

guys

its good that soon you will all moved on and that you realized that he wasent the right guy!!!!!!
 
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