Being Swept Away
Author: Crush Me


For you i would do anything, you know its true, i have never dont anything to hurt you. You cant see behind my pretty face, how you hurting me so.. dont you see that through your eyes you have made me lie, because if the truth be told you would have hurt me, i cant go out with my friends, but you can. You keep me locked away from the world. I have never been able to enjoy myself, because im always being told by you. You think your stronger than me, but inside your oh so weak, your only stronger because you live on my unhappiness. You strive on my tears, you breathe in my sorrow and make it your joy, you watch me cry and inside you smile! The tears that fall they once were smiles. You know its true, when i comfront you about how i feel, you never seem to care, but inside your the one who needs to look in the mirror and see what kind of person you are. Im being swept away, under a spell.. its been 4 years of all this pain, and now its taking controll of me.. all of me is gone.. are you happy? you have got what you want, im not real anymore, all of my selfcontroll is gone, im just like a little doll, you play with me and use me in your commands, you love was fake! just like the smiles you gave me, just like the hugs and all the gifts, they were trapts to lure me into this hell hole! Im spinning over and over into the never ending hallway.. someone save me, because the person who i thought would do anything for me... got me here..

------- Author's Notes -------

just releasing some emotions.. im trying to help myself, but nothings working. i feel like im stuck in this sad place.. for 4 years, i cant get out! its horrible how your best friend all the sudden has you under a spell, you thought it was love, but its fake!


Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* ( -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 09:00 pm

Crush me, this was deep..

keep in love does not keep you you clinched to suffocate you ,love holds you loosly so you could breath, yet it acknowledges that it is there so you won't stray away from a true heart, a couple needs their own given personal does not cause pain, it is never controlling..nor should is it be used for personal is always listening..and always sharing..sweetie love is so much more ...but not demanding..loved this , i wish you well...i lost a love in death that gave me space,i found love again.that continues to give me that space..God i love him soooo.
Meridian ( -- Friday, July 30 2004, 02:19 am


Expelling your inside feelings, after swelling like a balloon with glumness.... I sometimes, relate to your poem! Great way of writing, with vocab words, I never heard before..... I love it! Right on! Right on! Smiles, Meri
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