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For The First Ten Years
30 July, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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For the first ten years I never
slept,
Id lock myself in and wish I was
dead

Sleep was the last thing on my mind,
and the miracle chocolate bar didnt make me feel
fine

Every T.V. programes reminded me of
you,
even the 'airline' programe reminded me of when we first
flew

Music too,
every violin or guitar chord
reminds me that Im not with
you

After the first ten years i managed to
sleep,
but there you were in my dreams holding my hand as we
strolled down the beach,
but subconsciously I knew you were out of
reach

but my Love I have found another,
I know you would of wanted me to move on
and not to
suffer

------- Author's Notes -------

A poem to anyone

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.228) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 03:39 am

Ben aka hushy..your words knick me at the ...

base of my own being..to love,is to soar so high.. to lose is to die within...,to move on is to become strong..one never thinks it is possible until someone new comes along..Amazing things happem ..mountains get moved through LOVE..i love your work sweetie..keep that pen focused from the feelings of your loving heart..
HUGS/LOVE I also add a touch and share one of Meri's everlasting SMILES....
Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 11:01 am

So kind...

your comments always brighten up my day, I love your work also, have a nice day,take care much love ben
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 05:57 pm

you know I must say

Just to add a little humor to our day, when I was an 11th grader, my English teacher had me thinking.... When you say the word sleep.... Okay, suppose you were in English class, and you went to sleep, for 10 years, woke up on the 10th year, and you're 27 in the same clothes you were in while sleeping in English class.... Teeth yellow, hair looks like Don King's, you smell worse than a musk rat.....man o man, this poem is so good..... For The First Ten Years! Standing ovation! Good job Franklin! Smiles, Meri
Ben Franklni (80.6.138.109) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 10:38 pm

miss meg...

hello meri meri,thanks for ya uplifting comment, hope you have had a nice day x
 
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