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Silence Is Too Long Of A Wait....
30 July, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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when I
do not hear from you
my heart begins to cry
when I
do not feel you
my soul begins to sigh
I feel
your love from afar
yet
it is your voice on the phone I crave
you have a way of calming the tide
that hides beneath my mind
that controls what my heart feels and sees
when I've had
a roughly unusual day
I keep you
close to my heart
without shutting you in
I keep you
close to my soul
by freely letting you out
I love you sweetheart
thank you
for your given time..

------- Author's Notes -------

silence hurts in the worse ways

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.97.233) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 09:15 pm

Always near

Simple but very effective, Silence comes in many forms, and we each hear it in a different way. But a silence from someone near, can cut like a blade.
Paul (66.139.187.25) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 09:25 pm

Loneliness

Loneliness releases all of ones emotions
As you feel the cloud of darkness move in
Memories come to those alone some good / some bad
But what are memories if not shared do they become
ghost from within our minds!
Matters not the visit you know you will be sad
A phone call / A knock at the door
these are things that keep the darkness away!
When I read your poem I feel your emotion
Good work!
Terrie* (65.148.214.23) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 11:03 pm

Clive, sigh...as usual your response is.

so very uplifting, i can feel the arms of your sincere words embrace my soul..hugs/love m
Terrie* (65.148.214.23) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 11:21 pm

Paul, you feel & understand my pain so well..

the mighty expression of:i would rather be alone by myself than to feel alone when i am w/someone else..a simple phone call means alot..i am too much of a romantic, i have too much LOVE stored perhaps more than any man can handle .. i am so in love w/love.i had it all before my first love expired.. now it's about patience..hugs/love
 
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