Author: Crush Me


It seems
A piece of me
Drifts away
Into the darkness
Never to be seen again
Gone, as I feel I will be
Soon enough
As my heart falls apart
And I wonder if I will ever love
As people crowd
And try to help
As I scream
And hear no words
The people ask me what's wrong
All I see are shadows
They are people
Mumbling, somehow far away
I cant hear them anymore
They cant hear me
Though maybe because
I do not speak

------- Author's Notes -------

I was writing today, during the rain, it was just what i was feeling! enjoy! an thanks for comments!


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Thursday, August 5 2004, 02:47 pm

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Everyday eh? Nice thoughts! Nice words! Nice way of saying "a piece of me drifts away".... I like that.... THat's real cool.. Your poems are FUN to read! Smiles, Meri
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