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I Still Get Chills
Author: WilTheThrill

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I still get chills,
whenever i think about you,
thinking about everything youd say,
and everything wed do,
then you tried to take it all away,
so i moved on,
pot full of gold ,
just like a leprechaun,
you made me think,
of many horrible things,
oh how much sadness,
and morbid things depression brings,
i loved you girl,
more than youll ever know,
everyone keeps telling me just to try again,
and its my time to go,
i dont know if i should,
but theres one thing i do know,
the cowardly way you brought the news to me,
was what i call a low blow,
you had plenty of times,
to tell me to my face,
i keep wondering if you were like me,
and when you saw me your heart would race,
the time spent with you,
was wasted beyond compare,
and if theres any doubt that im going to hell,
then i guess ill see you there.

------- Author's Notes -------

more like a song or a rap than a poem but its got emotion

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 01:47 pm

the last line

One can almost feel your pain.... The last line really blew my mind... Oh man! You're great.... I hope you two go to Heaven though! You still get chills about the way she made you feel eh? What a beauty Wil! You're right! This poem has tons of emotion! Take care! Smiles, -Meri
*Emily* (24.176.153.185) -- Wednesday, August 4 2004, 01:03 am

hey!

haha..man i liked the last 2 lines! that was funny! even though it wuttin meant to be! lol! you really are awesome wil! i'm glad you're goin to school with me..gah..it'd be sucky without somebody i know there! much love!
EmAlAy#18
 
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