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Close Your Eyes
Author: StarlightDreamer

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Close your eyes and tell me what you see
Is it the reflection of who I use to be
When a ray of light comes shining through
That's my way of showing you.

Close your eyes and imagine me holding you in my arms
Looking into your eyes with all of my charms
Trying to give you some reason or rhyme
Of the love we once shared in another time.

When you feel that cool breeze upon your face
Know that it's me from another place
I know you can't feel me, touch me, or see
But this is the way it has to be.

So close your eyes and dream of our love
And know that I'm holding you from heaven above
For know this is how it has to be
I'll be waiting for you throughout eternity.

------- Author's Notes -------

This was written for the man I love who passed away. I wrote this from his perspective.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.86.251) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 11:56 am

Starlight Dreamer, i can easily feel your words..

i can easily feel where your emotions come and breath from, i have been there too, so hard to let go of a love that kept our souls/love alive... i extend my heartfelt condolences on your loss... together someday you will be..love has not died.. believe me... later you will find it in another.. i did, i spent many ,many years alone..but again love found me..this was sooo beautiful..God Bless You!!!
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 01:41 pm

Wow

Simply Deep! This poem sounds just like a male wrote it to a female! I'm sorry about your loss Starlight Dreamer. I love your depth! Very nice tribute! Take care! Smiles, -Meri
 
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