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Fear Of My Darkness
2 August, 2004
Author: Tammy

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My heart is full of sadness,
the pain cuts like a knife.
My soul cries out for freedom,
as tears over take my eyes.
Shadows gather round me
in this darkness that I live.
Rage pours through my veins
I'm hanging over the edge.
I cry out to the world, but
no one seems to hear.
I am truly alone in this
darkness that I fear.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 02:53 pm

You're Back!!

Hooray for Tammy! Welcome Back, Welcome Back! "Fear Of My Darkness" truly expresses your hurt... Depression ain't no joke! Haha.... Seems like no one is paying you no mind eh? Tell me about it... I hate when that happens... This poem is like an exhale of grief, I can hear it breathing! Your poetry is definitely alive! I hope you find peace within your heart and soul! Take care Tammy! Smiles, -Meri
Tammy (66.38.4.186) -- Tuesday, August 3 2004, 05:09 am

Meridian

Thanks for the welcome back!!!! Yea depression is something I seem to battle with alot, and your right it's no joke! That's all I have been writing about alot here lately. But Thank you for reading, commenting, and the welcome back. it means so much to me!
Mike (82.35.77.233) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 12:36 am

Theif!

I put the title as "theif", but it's not in the sense that you've stolen the poem. What I mean by it is simply that it seems as if you've stolen the words right from my heart. What you have written descirbes me 100%. Keep at it, girl. =)
Tammy (66.38.6.22) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 09:16 am

Mike took you comment wrong at first when you said

thief, I was gonna say I'm not a thief this is my published work, but now that I have read your comment. Thanks!!! I write what my heart feels, and I see that your heart seems to feel the same. I hope maybe this poem helped you in some way knowing that your not alone. I am really glad you liked it:)
joyce ivy (68.222.104.170) -- Sunday, January 9 2005, 08:35 pm

WOW TAMMY

love dark poetry...write some myself...I really like this one...thanks for sharing...joyce
tammy (66.38.4.119) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 07:29 am

joyce

Thank you hun, glad you enjoyed this poem, I have written alot of poems like this just haven't got them on the site yet, if we don't let all of our pain or our frustrations out we will burst.
joyce ivy (68.222.104.32) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 10:49 am

Y W Tammy

glad you enjoy my work...I can't wait to read your dark poems.....thanks for sharing....joyce
 
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