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Alone
Author: Brandi

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do you ever feel like your all alone
not a soul to talk to on the telephone?
you've got so many secrets, but w/ whom do u share?
It seems that no one could care, because they're never there
you sit alone in the dark
then the thoughts come
and oh, they leave their mark
you wonder why no one else feels this way
well I disagree, I've got something to say
you're not the only one
God is always there, when you feel like you've got no one
confide in him, he'll never leave your side
he won't wash away with the evening's tide
he'll always love you,
no matter what you do
all you have to believe
and when this life is over,
you'll be able to leave
leave into his paradise
go ahead, be enticed
he loves you for you, so don't ever change
even if others think your "different" or strange
so don't even feel alone, because God is always near
he'll lead you on the right path, let him help you steer
God is always there,
watching over you with care

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ashley nb (12.222.12.163) -- Tuesday, May 20 2003, 08:20 pm

great

loved it brandi. touching and it has meaning. im glad this poem has a reason like most do or should. keep up the good work!
ashley nb (12.222.12.163) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 02:44 am

--juss addin

okay, i juss read this again. i really liked it. its a good poem of hope and faith. k i juss had to add that.
Megzy (67.195.45.165) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 02:44 am

wondaful

i loved it and i'll say it again thats relly good & u DO HAVE TALENT... i dont wanna here u dissin urself gurl ur good!
Megzy (67.195.45.165) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 02:47 am

o yea

lol i fergot sumptin i wanted 2 say ~~ well brandi that was a good poem bout god and u were definately spreading the faith and love im proud of u gurl
CrYsTaL (216.63.217.252) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 04:56 pm

Aint it true!!!!!!

I always confide in that type of sying, because of how I usually feel like an outcast in this world. But then I remember, God's actually up there watching you! Great poem and great feeling Brandi! :)))
Ems (205.188.208.139) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 11:14 pm

awesome

hey brandi! i loved this poem becuz it's very true and now i've seen a whole other side of you! and yes, u do have talent...juss read my poems and u'll know! ;) well this poem is vrery true and it talks about faith, and love, and trust in God. i can relate and im sure lots of other people can too! love ya!
 
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