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My Last Night
Author: FoRsAkEn

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sitting alone
away from the phone
i think of you and start to tear
id be great if you were near
but ur so far away
it makes me want to shorten my stay
all these thoughts goin through my brain
making me not want to get on that plane
Uv'e been really kewl really great
im juss mad that we met so late
i onlee hav one more year
i juss hope that it is here
so i can be there for you....by ur side
these fellings for you are so hard to hide
Im sorry i didnt leave you with a hug or a kiss
buh juss make shure u remember this
it doesnt matter if were oceans apart
you still be in my heart
so wen i leave please dont cry
because ill be back....come on... would i lie?

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Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Monday, August 9 2004, 05:50 am

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Oh you're good FoRsAkEn! The last line, "come on, would i lie?" put the icing on the cake! I like the question, as if you're saying, "come on, have I ever steered you wrong".... That famous line "I'll be back"... You're the next Arnold! (hahaha) Cute poem, on missing someone!

Smiles,
Meri
 
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