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Tell Me, Please -quatrains-
Author: Del

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My love and joy has turned to pain,
Like a sunny day suddenly spoiled by rain.
You know, my dear, how I love you.
Oh, how I wish you loved me too.

I think about you all thru the day.
At night I feel so blue,
Wondering if you think of me too.
'I love you,' is what I'd like you to say.

Maybe, someday my sun will shine.
Maybe, someday you'll walk thru this door.
Maybe, someday you might really be mine,
And my heart will ache no more.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.86.73) -- Friday, August 20 2004, 09:42 pm

Del, sad,sweet and heart tuggin'..

i hope your love comes to stay and your pain goes away...excellent wording..
 
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