Can You Explain?
can you explain the symptoms
that I have?
my heart is always singing
my heart is always glad
what makes me dizzy?
yet I still want to jump up so high?
why do I feel an electrical wave
ricochet inside my soul?
I do not know what a neon flash feels like
but I bet I can describe it very well
and i know you would surely tell
because you'd see me glow
when I hear his voice on the phone
I get so weak,
I feel my heart race out of beat
as I close my eyes
I can feel his words caress my bare skin
I can feel him gently clasp his hands against my face
I can feel his arms wrap around my waist
I can feel the heat from his body cling onto mine
I feel my self levitate to a higher ground
but can you explain the symptoms to me
of why I feel and taste life as I do?
because i'd like you to feel
and taste it too..
------- Author's Notes -------
love is sweeter than candy....
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Clive (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 12:11 am|
Umm signing in you're soul, Heart pounding at every turn, is it or is it not, could it be this time or not, love calls at every turn but only when we are open, does our heart hear it's knock. Again Terrie you write so well.
|joyce (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 03:25 am|
terri your writing is great... i know the feelings in your poem very well..and thats for the great comments on my poems...
|Terrie* (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, September 13 2004, 02:06 am|
vibrations of his singing heart enter my soul..
the taste of love, such a sweet sensation
felt between two hearts i almost passed a love
w/a sweet caring heart.i indeed am in full bloom
and very much in love...thanx to an understanding man, whom put up such a sacrifice for me...HUGS/LOVE
|Terrie* (22.214.171.124) -- Monday, September 13 2004, 02:09 am|
to feel the breath of love upon your flesh even when your apart? thank you for your comment glad to know that you know the feeling....
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