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Death Of A Love
23 August, 2004
Author: XX

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I lived for her
i loved for her
i died for her
i cried for her
she made me cry
she made me die
i am lost i ask why
she says the love is gone
its the same old song
when i ask her why
i start to cry
i start to die
no more heart
its all broke apart
one peace left
keeps me alive
my baby girl
will let me survive
she gives me the strength
to go on

------- Author's Notes -------

me and my wife are splitting up all she can say is i dont love you no more to me love is forever it dont fade with love you will work out everything she work out nothing i loved her to death i guess i think about when she gave me my ring and the preacher guy said this ring is a perfict circle and so is love ....she brok that circle so i cut my weedding ring to remind of the pain allways so i can rember that once there was love and not to give up

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 11:36 pm

I'm sorry to hear

I hope you two reconcile your differences! It breaks my heart to read sour news.....I hope you take care.... Heart wrenching words, I felt your pain, right through my chest....Nice one Xx -Meri
joyce (68.222.111.123) -- Tuesday, August 24 2004, 07:41 am

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XX this is great nd remember for them we must go on....I have been there and this made me cry...
Terrie* (65.150.170.86) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 07:38 pm

Xx, my heart cries for you,

this was very heart tuggin' i felt your pain thru your words, i can sense the difficulty of sharin', i Agree w/my friend Meri..i too hope you both reconcile..and if it doesn't work out i hope you both remain best of friends..
xx (198.81.26.73) -- Thursday, August 26 2004, 01:21 am

she is gone

she says there is nothing to go back to i love her so much that i am not going to beg her to stay cuz this is what she wants not me there is no hard feelings but the queston why why me why i love her so much i am willing for to leave me for to be happy i want her to be happy i am hurt i have no1 to hold are to hold me we never fight even through this and we are freinds are i think so she seems so confused i tould her there is no going back to this for me and i couldnt go back buti want her back so bad i want her to hold me and say she loves me but i no it aint going to happing i just hurt so bad thanx for all your concern and just if you will pray for us me her and baby to be happy even if it aint with each other i no its going to take time but i love her so
 
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