Outside the rain is falling
And darkness takes the light
I lie awake and listen
To the sounds that make the night
With every drop of rain I feel
The tears slip down my face
How is it love can feel so good
Yet bring me to this place?
Inside my heart is aching
I am longing for your kiss
I close my eyes and feel your touch
There's so much that I miss
I wish that I could hold you
Through night into the day
We never seem to have a chance
But love will find a way
I want to share each moment
When my love is bubbling through
And though my heart feels heavy
It is only missing you!
Comments on this poem/writing:
|joyce (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, August 24 2004, 06:39 am|
Brian i just wanted you to know this is a very beautiful poem, so much emotion...i relly loved it...
|Terrie* (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 06:24 pm|
you writing reveals that you have a very passionate heart ..i justlove and admire your writing...
|LinzAy (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 06:29 pm|
Beautiful writing Brian.
Though, the whole poem was great I loved the first verse.
Vedy, vedy good :)
|spc Tony Hill (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, September 3 2004, 01:53 am|
hey man just wanted to tell u great poem. being here in iraq i feel the same see im a newleywed just got married now im over here hoping it aint my time to be bareied but great poem though
|Quintonia Beckley (18.104.22.168) -- Wednesday, October 4 2006, 12:34 am|
I like this poem because, it kind of bring me comfort, between my love towards this certain person whom I have been missing for a week but it seems as if it has been a year.
|heidi (22.214.171.124) -- Monday, July 2 2007, 09:36 am|
its very expressive, nice work
|madhavi (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, June 12 2009, 10:46 pm|
hi! i dnt knw wat 2 tell u but 1 thing i can... having a talent is something amazing, but impressing hearts with talent in the way v present is very worthy! even im in the same poeticline i feel more happy when i put my surrounders joy n comfort with ma additions!! u r really some1 precious keep on enjoying with others joy on u!!!1 god bless u! bubye
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