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They've Gone Away....
24 August, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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you know what bites?
when a friend dies
and so many words were left unsaid
that hurts you soooo bad
yet they do not know
how bad they've hurt you

because they've gone away

it only hurts when
your heart grasps the effect
you try to breathe
you try to speak
you try so hard to move

but the only signal your heart releases

is a tear
a tear of blood that slowly runs down your heart
in slow motion..
because even the tear got a major shock

you place your hands over your heart

even the heartbeat
has changed it's tune
from a cheerful beat
to a beat that’s fading away

and even up close

your heartbeat can not be heard
because your friend has passed away
your friend doesn't know
the effect the words that weren't said
had on your heart
and on you...

------- Author's Notes -------

Friends are Gods greatest gift... especially when it comes to keeping/sharing SECRETS... (all in good taste)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce (68.222.111.123) -- Tuesday, August 24 2004, 07:36 am

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Terrie this is really beautiful writing...
Terrie* (65.148.232.188) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 09:01 pm

Joyce, thanx...

no matter,what manner
we lose a friend
they are our best friends
and are irreplacable....
 
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