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It Only Happens When I Think
Author: Your Melody

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My tears have dried
and the scars have healed.
My mind's stopped racing
and my heart is almost whole.
I'm smiling more
and even laughing too.
But tonight it's raining
and I'm thinking of you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Megan (205.188.116.130) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 10:54 pm

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It is short and sweet. I like it a lot.
:) nice job
-meg-
Your Melody (207.190.93.140) -- Thursday, September 2 2004, 02:14 am

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Thanks Meg, it may look short and sweet, but it took a while before the right words came to me though. Thanks again. :D
mental (66.153.163.215) -- Friday, September 3 2004, 12:07 am

thank you

very thought provoking and well done and thanks for your comment . mental
Terrie* (65.148.230.26) -- Friday, September 3 2004, 01:13 am

Melody, our hearts keep good thoughts saved..

i found this beautiful heartfelt writing extremely touching..thoughts like relationships good or bad the good always overpowers the bad..
excellent piece...
Your Melody (207.190.93.130) -- Saturday, September 18 2004, 11:58 pm

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Thanks Terrie and mental...and you're right, the good always overpowers the bad
 
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