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True Love -tetractys-
Author: Del

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Love
can start
with a smile
a gentle touch
it's an unexplainable emotion.
when it's true love, it can last forever.
how can you tell
it it's true
or a
farce?

Trust
your heart,
if it's real
your heart will know.
it will show you the way to Paradise
two hearts must meld as one to be true love.
trust and sharing
are always
there for
love.

------- Author's Notes -------

(This is a fairly new poem style, started by an Englishman, Ray
Stebbing, a retired FE Lecturer.)
Syllables are 1,2,3,4,l0,l0,4,3,2,1. Try one sometime...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

shiloh (74.65.121.49) -- Sunday, July 6 2008, 02:38 am

(rises from seat, claps hands loud and long)

Bravo! and Bravo again! this is very well made, and i applaud the effort as well as the end result. I can do 2-4-6-8-2, but nothing more than that. i believe you have given me a goal to work toward. thank you... peace...
 
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