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Dear God
Author: Amy BananaHead

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Dear God, can you hear me?
Are you there?
It's Amy.
I know it hasnt been long since we last spoke
I'm sorry. I know you're busy.
My mums sick again.
Daddy said she might not come home this time.
He says you need her with you.
But God, I want to make a deal.
How about you have my toys?
I can buy more, but I cant buy another mum.
Dear God, please answer me.
Are you there God?
It's Amy.
I need my mum God.
Please don't take her away.

------- Author's Notes -------

By Amy Aged 7.

This was a letter to God before mummy went away. I was supposed to send it to him, but I forgot where I put it. Maybe mummy would have stayed if I gave this letter to God.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.215.139) -- Friday, September 10 2004, 09:23 pm

Amy, this tugged at my heart...wiping tears away

i had to leave for awhile to dry my eyes....... as i was reading this i thought about, what if this was me ..how would i react to such lovely selfless words..i tell you i'd cry, perhaps just as your mommie did, when she had to go home, no "mommie"
wants to leave their baby behind, she knew daddy was there to love and protect, something hard to explain right now ,your still at a very tender age.. to hear your silent cries in your prayers ,
bruised my heart, never place blame upon yourself sweetie.. cry all you have share your pain...but never place upon yourself any emotional blame... when my childrens daddy passed away , i had a tough time accepting it, therefore i had great difficulty explaining to them...a good friend , bought them a book he highly recommended

"WHY DID HE DIE?" By Audrey Harris. hugs/love....
Terrie* (65.148.215.139) -- Friday, September 10 2004, 09:23 pm

Amy, this tugged at my heart...(wiping tears away)

i had to leave for awhile to dry my eyes....... as i was reading this i thought about, what if this was me ..how would i react to such lovely selfless words..i tell you i'd cry, perhaps just as your mommie did, when she had to go home, no "mommie"
wants to leave their baby behind, she knew daddy was there to love and protect, something hard to explain right now ,your still at a very tender age.. to hear your silent cries in your prayers ,
bruised my heart, never place blame upon yourself sweetie.. cry all you have share your pain...but never place upon yourself any emotional blame... when my childrens daddy passed away , i had a tough time accepting it, therefore i had great difficulty explaining to them...a good friend , bought them a book he highly recommended

"WHY DID HE DIE?" By Audrey Harris. hugs/love....
Sarah A (82.35.79.145) -- Saturday, September 11 2004, 03:42 pm

Amy...

Honey, you can't blame yourself. Terrie's right. i think maybe you should speak to your daddy and tell him how you feel. i'm sure he'll be able to find a way to try and help you understand a bit more. when i get sad, i sometimes write about my felings. when i was younger, i used to draw pictures too... keep writing your feelings down. even if you dont share them with us, i think it will help. thinking of you.
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Sunday, October 17 2004, 03:00 pm

Hugs

Hello Amy,
Living day to day can be a funny old game,
For your mum to get ill I'm sorry this happened,
No one was to blame, She will never get sick again, and you can talk to her often,
She will always listen to your words,
Write your thoughts you do this so well,
I read your words and cry, because they touch me inside, you are talented in the way you write,
When you touch other peoples feelings as you do so well, thats a gift you have inside of you.
Mummy and Daddy are so proud of you.
Hugs Clive
joyce ivy (68.222.112.72) -- Sunday, October 17 2004, 04:34 pm

GODS WILL AMY

Hello Amy, I lost my mommy also..last month on Sept. 3 my mommy went away to be in heaven with the lord..I guess he needed her there....and I also felt I had not prayed hard enough...but I know in my heart my mommy is happy in heaven with her son and her dad...and now her mother..on Sept. 30 my grandmother went to heaven with them...now they are all happy there soaring the skies as angels...never blame yourself...God has his will...and it will be done...we can't change that...Talk to your dad about that..it might help you understand....Amy you write beautifully from your heart...such a beautiful poem....you don't worry baby about your mommy...She is a beautiful angel soaring the skies with my mommy and my grandmother now...you be happy with your dad..and love him with all your heart...and you talk to mommy anytime you want..I do that and it helps...you have a wonderful day...and keep writing all your feelings from your heart they are beautiful...sweet Amy...your friend...joyce
 
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