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My Birthday Wish
Author: Amy BananaHead

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On my birthday, I made a wish.
I wished that you wouldnt get sick.
I wished that all my toys and presents would go away,
So you could get better.
I wished so hard,
I even did it twice.
My wish didnt come true.
You got sicker and sicker.
I kept my toys and my presnts.
You went away.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.142.45.148) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 11:12 am

Amy, your words draw tears to my soul....

your words touch a very sensitive spot in this moms heart, difficult to make a comment w/o a tear flowing down my cheek... the breaking away of the umbilical cord is such a harsh one...
Hug/love
Meridian (172.173.88.226) -- Tuesday, September 14 2004, 11:29 am

so touching

Hey Amy. I'm sorry to hear about the loss of your mother. I hope all is well with you and your family. You have my prayers.

Forever Smiling,
Meridian
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Saturday, October 16 2004, 09:20 pm

Meridian

Hello Meridian. Thank you for reading my poem. everything is a lot better now. me and daddy play lots of games together so we dont get sad all the time.
love Amy
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Sunday, October 17 2004, 02:51 pm

Amy

Amy your words are from the heart,
Amy your words touch my soul,
I read your poems all of the time,
some I smile and some I cry,
I cry in a good way that you so young,
understand and write so well,
keep up the great writing,
Hugs Clive
P.S my daughters name is Amy
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Monday, October 18 2004, 06:46 pm

Mr Clive

Thank you Mr Clive. i'm happy you like my poems. its funny sometimes because people didnt used to read what i wrote before and now EVERYONE always writes lots of stuff about them. it makes me feel really good and makes me want to keep on writing for ever and ever. I'm not that young MR Clive..... I'm 7...... thats a BIG GIRL age. wow your daughter is called Amy too? i would get mixed up if i saw her and someone called Amy. it would be funny because we would both look at you.
love Amy
Jenny (209.214.150.146) -- Thursday, October 21 2004, 04:40 pm

Bless you Baby

You are so sweet....
 
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