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Silent Submission
13 September, 2004
Author: AJ

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Now I sit in silent submission,
funny how we think the deaf can listen,
Basing decisions on inuition,
How does one choose when he can only envision,
Fate plays its cards through its Pawns with percision,
Tragic how Its spawn brings the strong to submission,
Ironic how we envision the deaf to listen.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.142.69.179) -- Monday, September 13 2004, 08:28 pm

freestyle eh?

Nice rhyming, nice poetic flow! You've got the creative juices AJ!
Great job!
Smiles,
Meri
Terrie* (65.135.86.214) -- Thursday, September 16 2004, 01:32 am

AJ, this is a magnificent piece..

you have a great way with words ,deaf ears fall upon you...we all fee what you say...( the deaf listen far better than one whom refuses to hear)
you have extremely great talent...love to read more....
Nostaliga (64.32.146.37) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 02:05 am

Origin...

I can but ask myself what you were feeling.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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