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Everything Familiar
19 September, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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I closed my eyes...for but a moment
And when I reopened them to see everything so familiar again
Everything familiar was gone
Everything was gone......everything

I scream out in loneliness
I scream out in emptiness
I reach out for it all
I reach out
But there's nothing
Nothing left to beat inside this empty chest

And as I scream...for a moment and over
That moment feels as though it's renamed itself as an eternity
A moment in an hourglass never out of time
A moment......an eternity
And I bleed...for all I've lost
For everything familiar that so quickly, so suddenly disappeared
I'm hollow inside and out now
I'm hollow now......so incomplete

------- Author's Notes -------

Lyrics in my head....though they probably have no rythym to ya guys :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Tuesday, September 21 2004, 06:35 am

...

very descriptive and imaginative.
LinzAy (4.27.181.62) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 12:28 am

EV!!!!!!!!!

O wow!! been a while there pal! lol

Thanks for the comment :)
everett (209.240.207.43) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 06:26 pm

yeah...

it has been a while. what the hell is wrong with me?? lol
 
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