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Suicide
Author: Brittany Walker

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My life is like a black whole
its hard to feel or think.
Its like i have no soul
i think im beging to sink.
This feeling is so confusing
its hard to deal with this.
nothing seems soothing
im begining to get pi**ed.
I feel so secluded
from everyone around me.
My mind feels so polluted
its impossible to see.
I cant handle being confused
all by myself day after day.
Locked inside myself's mind
for why should i have to pay.
I havent done anything wrong
to get this kind of punishment.
I wont take this sh*t for that long
no matter who gives me their consent.
Im so tired of this place
and the people that are here.
My time is just a waste
as i cry another tear.
Im giving up on life at last
because there is no hope for me.
There will no longer be a past
people are so self centered they will never see.
Ive come to the end
and i have no honor nor pride.
Im already dieing within
thats why im depending on suicide.
Good bye to you
good bye to me.
Good bye to those who are true
im sorry to those who could not see.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (205.188.209.39) -- Tuesday, November 18 2003, 02:38 am

i can relate

i really think i related to this poem....when i was 8 years old is my frist time i tried to kill myself! 8 years old! i have a hard life! and i really liked this poem
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Thursday, November 20 2003, 08:10 am

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I really liked this poem, and I too, can relate. It seems in all the poems you write, the readers can all relate. I think you are one whose been through a lot and I think that experience is something great to write about, keep it up...
Ashley R (64.66.199.39) -- Sunday, December 14 2003, 10:37 pm

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Hey again. Although i haven't been through what you've been thru, hang in there Brit!
 
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