What's It All Mean
19 September, 2004
Author: LinzAy
I thought this fight was over
But you've jumped back on your feet
I thought I'd worn you down enough
But you won't accept defeat
You've armed yourself again
Got back into your stance
We put all this effort into fighting
Being civil has no chance
My head pounds harder with every word you scream
I scream other words back at you but what's it all mean
You won't leave me alone
You won't back down and die
So we stand here face to face
But we don't see eye to eye
But what's it all mean
When my head pounds harder with every word you scream
And what's it all mean
...What's it all mean...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| joyce ivy (68.222.91.156) -- Sunday, September 19 2004, 04:29 pm very nicely written..you really get your point across..i've been there you will never see eye to eye... |
| LinzAy (4.27.181.33) -- Sunday, September 19 2004, 04:52 pm Thanks you for your comment and the time spent on my poem :) I'm not quite sure where this poem came from as I had not been fighting with anyone...maybe it's past frustrations coming out of me? Anyway...thanks :) |
| Scorpio (67.162.95.179) -- Monday, September 20 2004, 06:33 am This poem fit perfectly with my own troubles. I love your style and critique, and hope to view more like this. Not so much in anger, but in this perspective of style. Very, very nicely written. |
| joyce ivy (68.222.112.171) -- Tuesday, September 21 2004, 06:54 am some of my poems just come form love,past loves, fears of losing at love again..when i write it's just what is in my heart at the time...guess thats what poetry is all about...your feeling and what on your mind at the time... |
| LinzAy (4.27.181.62) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 12:27 am Scorpio: Thankyou so much for the great comment:) heh...most of my poems aren't anger filled, only a few...but i think I favor them? lol. Thanks again... Joyce: thankyou for el commento! :) |
| LinzAy (4.27.181.62) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 12:35 am lol...i'm a dork.........I meant to say..."Yea, I'll agree with you on that being what poetry is about" :) |
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