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Lost Kitten
22 September, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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i'm lost wet and alone
no where to run
no where to hide

the rain keeps following me
the sun won't shine upon me
the moon seems to hide his face

i feel so alone
in this strange far off place
i'm but a kitten lost and strayed

i know somewhere beyond
lies a dog in the dark
i can hear him bar

perhaps a child may hear my meow
and come to my rescue now..

------- Author's Notes -------

Amy, a cute comment you addressed to me..
made me remember my childhood and i wanted to bring it all back. instead i will share some of my poetry w/you ..just for kids ..thank you sweetie for bringing the inner child out, to dip her feet in the water..this feels sooooo good... thank you !!!!!!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (66.46.241.237) -- Thursday, September 23 2004, 04:19 am

the kid in me enjoyed this too

Terrie you so talented you can write about love, passion. and now this. Very nice. I know this is for children ,I must be a 50 year old kid Haa cause I enjoyed it.
Terrie* (65.148.208.51) -- Thursday, September 23 2004, 04:46 am

Barb, thank you doll...

yea the best part i love of my life is the kid in me...that was one thing my husband taught me before he moved on into the world of paradise... love of passion and one being let the kid out ...and psssst you know what I DO every day, and it always reminds me of the more important things in life...slow down smell the roses...yes i have poetry of all sorts in my years of trying to GROW up heh.....after all, we all have a touch of kid in us... we have to to balance out...i am so glad you enjoyed this...hugs/love always..
Amy BananaHead (82.35.77.233) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 06:22 pm

Miss Terrie

Miss Terrie this poem made me feel sad. I feel sorry fo the cat that got lost. didnt her mummy want her anymore? I would take her home if i knew where she was. i would call her fluffy. i like your poems for kids though. i can understand these much better. thank you miss terrie. love amy
Terrie* (4.182.138.36) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 11:00 pm

Amy, yea it was sad, but ...

my husband adored kittens..he was that grown up child that rescued that kitten from the rain . the kitten wandered away from it's mommie,he named it wanderer, he returned it to the neighbors.
 
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