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Look Mommie I Can Count To Three
23 September, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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look mommy I can count to three
daddy is so proud of me
I have a puppy a fish and a kitty
tha makes 1-2-3
I have a mommy a daddy and me
that makes 1-2-3
we have a little car
a big truck
and daddy has a bike
that makes 1-2-3
we have breakfast, lunch and dinner
1-2-3
look daddy are you proud of me
I love you
1-2-3
that make three
you mommie and me...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Saturday, September 25 2004, 03:56 am

Three

Three always fits so well,
I Love You fits into 3
so nice to smile at 123
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 06:30 pm

Miss Terrie

This one made me laugh. you are very good at writing poems Miss Terrie. Love Amy
joyce ivy (68.19.189.189) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 06:56 pm

very sweet

love this it was very sweet
joyce ivy (68.19.189.189) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 06:56 pm

very sweet

love this it was very sweet
Terrie* (4.182.138.36) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 11:16 pm

Amy, i am so tickled...

to have you enjoy my writing..love to you too sweetie
Terrie* (4.182.138.36) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 11:17 pm

Clive, uh huh..

fits absolutely perfect...
definently something worth every smile..
Terrie* (4.182.138.36) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 11:19 pm

Joyce, thank you...

i'm glad you found a sweet taste for it...
 
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