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A Fake Forever
Author: Brown Eyz

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Don't tell me you love me I can see it in yours eyes,
you dont really mean it I can see through your lies.
It tears like a knife every time your not true,
because the truth really is that I do love you.
So don't make me promises that you'll give me the world,
deep down inside I know I'm not your only girl.
Forever isn't a word that you just throw around,
don't act like my man if your not willing to wear the crown.
It's hard for me to admit that I love you so,
when I know your feelings for me will probably never grow.
Your eyes and your smile intrigue me so much,
even though you are sneaky I long for your touch.
I'd give anything in this world for you to want me like I need you,
it's so painful being together yet if we weren't I don't know what I'd do,
So please remember this the next time you want to lie,
I deserve better don't kill me inside.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

XoForeverXo (24.75.7.209) -- Sunday, March 14 2004, 06:10 am

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i love how your start your poem off! its amazing... i love it till the very end!
heaven a.k.a sad girl (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 01:51 am

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i love it.i agree wit Xo.
 
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