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Wisdom
28 September, 2004
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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To be thought of as wise.

Is a good disguise.


Hiding the fears.

Never showing tears.

Being strong because afriad of being weak.

So seeing the beauty in life.

Keeps from having alot of strife.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 07:55 am

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Nice rhymes here Barb...many people hide their fears to appear strong. It's good to look for the beauty in life. Well written
joyce ivy (68.19.189.189) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 06:38 pm

very good barb

people use to look at me as the tough one until lately when i finally started letting them read my poems...this poem is me...great job...joyce
barb (66.46.241.148) -- Wednesday, September 29 2004, 03:24 am

thanks

yea Tough keeps you from having hurt feelings, but it also keeps you from having happy feelings.
Terrie* (65.148.233.70) -- Wednesday, September 29 2004, 04:24 pm

Barb, good points to ponder..

there is a time to be strong and not to be strong,the beauty of it remains seen in ones heart...best thing in all situations is to be yourself. ..i'm like everybody else...i become strong when my family and friends need me..otherwise yea i am a weak and fragile flower, i believe we get our inner strength from a higher source...your knowledge is very high powered... ..
barb (209.112.22.97) -- Wednesday, September 29 2004, 05:49 pm

Thanks terrie

I think this disabilty came for a reason my thinking is what he thinks and just gives to me to express.
Martin Vann (67.234.27.72) -- Wednesday, September 29 2004, 09:05 pm

Sometimes, When We Close, Our Heart's Eyes,We See

Barb,

Life is hard, we all know that, for shelter, sometimes, we slip, into our hearts. Then, we see, eveything as it was meant to be, yet sometimes, we have to close, the eyes, of of heart's so...,so, we can see.

This is a stand up poem, everyone should applaud the the words of your, and our hearts, you speak, so well, for all of us, you bring us to heaven, back from hell.

Perhaps, to much, Barb, these words I say, yet, you more than share your heart with us, you share, yesterday and tomorrow. I pray in the morning, I see the sun shine. That is all, I have to say.

MV
 
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