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Miles Apart - I Miss You
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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I think about you so very near,
Everyday my love flows for you,
You are in everything I do,
From washing the clothes,
To a hug from my mind,
Even though we are miles apart,
You never seem far from my heart,
In my dreams I reach out to touch you,
Only to awake and your never there,
I remember your voice so caring to hear,
I remember your voice so loving and giving,
I hope you feel me as I still do you,
One day we will be closer and that hug will be true,
One day we will be closer and you'll feel my love for you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.204.14) -- Saturday, October 2 2004, 01:54 am

Clive,your heart is so young and in love...

my heart was scorched with your feelings of love so true..i felt the emotion expressed by you...i know these same exact feelings...that make my heart cry...i tell no lie...hun your words are are so well known and felt ..thank you for sharing the biggest part.... of your heart...
barb (209.112.24.134) -- Saturday, October 2 2004, 08:52 pm

so sensitive

This is nice. You must of had your coffee before writing this.Ha
barb (209.112.24.134) -- Saturday, October 2 2004, 08:57 pm

oops

Wrong poet about the coffee. It is a nice poem though.
lourdes (70.123.100.146) -- Tuesday, January 9 2007, 06:04 am

excellent

i know just what ur talking about and the poem is great
Bipedalguy (4.156.51.99) -- Wednesday, January 10 2007, 05:11 am

Great use of words

I wish I could write (or speak) like that.
Beautiful !
 
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