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Still Too Far Away...
4 October, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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to dream of you
becomes my comfort
yet not quite close enough for your touch
still too far away from healing
the bad nights away

a simple gesture brings you closer
a forgotten word pulls you away

a thoughtful dream stands out
and eliminates the waste
lonlines never quite known
for all the love you have shown

you’re a dream I hope for someday
you’re a dream I always crave
and taste from far away

...if dreams do come true
and i finally awake from this
recurring dream of mine

I'll find myself
laying right next to you

------- Author's Notes -------

You're my DREAM come true...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Monday, October 4 2004, 12:51 am

Dream a Dream

Never give up on your Dreams,
Never give up on your wants,
In time Dream come ture,'
In time dreams become life,
I love your words.
Terrie* (65.148.204.144) -- Monday, October 4 2004, 01:39 am

Clive, in my heart.........

the dream continues as in real life...thank you for such an endearing comment ...true friends sweet word of advice... i shall follow..i will never give up on my DREAMS...
Meridian (172.129.254.155) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 12:09 am

There's no harm in dreaming

Dream on, dream on! Dream until the dream becomes real, until your fiction, your fantasy, your fairytale, becomes realistic, and non-fiction! You know your poem was so great that it reminded me of Cinderella, and other stories, where at the end of the book, the story was so great it made your heart rise from out of your chest. Heavenly poem girl! Nicely done!

Smiley face,
Meri
Terrie* (65.148.205.129) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 01:41 am

Meri, thank you thank you thank you

dream on i remain doing and still i wake up alone.....BUT...SOOn ...oh yea soon will tyhat DREAM be as real as you and i and all the poetsa here...ya may hear my contentment when my dream becomes REEEEAL
Martin Vann (67.234.27.170) -- Tuesday, October 19 2004, 05:29 pm

Your'e Dream Will Come True

Terrie,

If, there is a God, and we know, he exist, he lives in our hesrts, memories, thoughts, dreames, we only share, with ourselves at night, God is there. Dreames do, come true..., the do, come true.

MV
 
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