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Everyday
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Everyday you are in my soul,
Feelings overwhelm the way I feel,
My eyes well with tears for my love of you,
To feel this way reminds me were right,
To feel this way Im filled with pride,
I feel you take my hand,
The energy that flows through could light the sky,
Our lifes entwined no longer apart,
You have become the air I breathe,
You are the light I follow,
You are the darkness that keeps me from harm,
Everyday that follows,
I will feel your beauty reaching out to hold me near,
Everyday that follows,
Our connection bonds tighter than before,
Everyday that follows know I love you more.

------- Author's Notes -------

Near or far you know who you are?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (66.46.241.182) -- Monday, October 4 2004, 03:41 pm

kind words

Whoever she is is very lucky to have a nice kind heart as yours care about her. Straight forward words. very good clive.
barb (209.112.22.52) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 12:08 am

It just sunk in

Is the person you love on this site.Is the first inital "T" I think I know who it is if all this is right. Your writing to her is so special.
Terrie* (65.148.231.36) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 02:04 am

Clive, in ones heart........true love remains...

ahhhh...
the wonders of love...
the wonders of a heart...
the wonders of a curious mind...
hmmm..let see...
since i do comment on thee..
my first initial is "T"....
how many more could there be?....
unfortunantly......
i do not kiss and tell..
but...
it is....
not me......

but i will add ....
this is indeed LOVELY ;-)
barb (209.112.22.52) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 02:36 am

reminds me

The song "you're so vain you probably think this song is about you" When I first read this I thought I wonder if it's me. Then I gave my head a shake. and then I thought I think I know who I went back and read the comments you got. a really good choice if it's who I think. she's kind, loving and talented. My curiousity is bad. But your writing is good.
Terrie* (65.136.7.119) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 02:49 am

Barb in c/o Clive

i just wanted to add into the humour ya know my 2 cents and my 2 moments of fame LOL, cause 'aye there are plenty of "T"'s BUT i am 1 out of 3 that comment to our friends loving words..probabby the main 1..but that is me..i just happen to put myself into everybodys words, as you can see ;-)BUT..that was indeed a cute little Jesture in case it was meant 4 me Doll..AGAIN...Clive again lovely words...
Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 10:21 pm

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Well Barb you make me blush, If distance were but a step away I'm sure "T" would come my way,
I love the letters she puts together, I love your words true and simple To meet you both would be a day to remember,
But the girl I'm with is "D" not "T"
love you all
esp in dreams
barb (216.123.56.247) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 11:06 pm

oh I know dave is the person Hha Ha

"D" is very Lucky .Did You hear that "D" treat him right . Someday maybe we all will get together and go for a coffee.
Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 11:38 pm

is dave a girl??

no a girl
barb (216.123.56.247) -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 11:59 pm

you never know these days

no Dave is a guy Hha.Ok Ok I know now that you are a guy for sure.
 
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