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A Heavenly Night With You
4 October, 2004
Author: Del

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What a beautiful galactic evening!
Just you and I, the stars and the moon.
I was just aching to spend an evening with you.
Never thought it would be this soon.

We're heading toward our favorite spot,
Under an old gnarled ancient tree.
I remember the night we came here,
And you gave your first kiss to me.

The tree is on the edge of a precipice,
Which gives us a breathtakingly view.
You pulled me so close and whispered,
'My darling, how much I really love you!'

So tenderly you caressed my body,
Called me your little concubine,
Told me you'd love me forever,
And said, 'forever you will be mine.'

We were numb with physical passion.
The fire in our hearts just burned.
We almost lost our consciousness,
But finely our senses returned.

We hurried back to our motel,
So we could fulfill this erotic desire.
Where once again we could become one,
And put out these aching heart's fire.

------- Author's Notes -------

Originally Submitted: September 22, 2004

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