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Do You Think?...
Author: Terrie*

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come tell me
express what you feel
do you also hold these feelings?

is it possible
that my passion is not acceptable
to enter his world?

but what if?

my thoughts are of a positive love
they do no one any harm
is it not true that the birds sing of passion
before the sunrise?

my passion I confess
is as powerful as the love
of the man whom shares this passion with me

together he and I,
we share
a bit of heavens spice

with the lost souls
that express so much negativity...
never be too quick to forget
that at one time you were as bold as me

reach me when I'm way past 103
you will see
the passion will continue to live within me

my passion
I believe is blessed
with his divine everlasting love

the same love he had
when he gave up his life so that I may live
and never forget
that he is present in the passion
tha keeps my heart alive..

------- Author's Notes -------

PASSION a part of life.. LIFE a part of passion
LIFE is a passion... PASSION is a life...

PASSIONATE-LIFE

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Monday, October 11 2004, 04:20 am

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All I have to say is this is a pleasent Dream
;-)
Terrie* (65.148.210.3) -- Monday, October 11 2004, 09:03 pm

Clive, Pleasingly Pleasant huh?

after all what is life w/o passion correct?..
you know me too well, i hide from no one...
well, maybe...gonna go back and enjoy my Latte'

do enjoy your DREAMS..i promise not to wake ya..
;-)
joyce ivy (68.222.91.72) -- Wednesday, October 13 2004, 03:29 pm

LOVE IT TERRIE

passion is my life...
without it I can't live...
bless the one above...
who gave me the passion to share...
we all have a passion inside us...
we all just want to give...
Beautiful passion Terrie
Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Wednesday, October 13 2004, 07:19 pm

you can

you can wake me, I'm sure we have lot to talk about.
Meri (172.129.132.219) -- Wednesday, October 13 2004, 07:38 pm

Of course,

Lady T! "Do you think"! Wonderful, poem with a question mark at the end! Passion and love are connected, because they both deal with the heart! Ooo, heavens spice! Spice like, thyme, crushed red pepper, oregano, and parsley eh!

Your poem had some good flavor! I enjoyed the taste!
Smiley face,
Your goofy poet,
Meri
Terrie* (65.148.213.36) -- Wednesday, October 13 2004, 07:50 pm

Meri,Meri,Meri.......

Girrrrrrl, you have me rockin' up the homestead over here..good thing there wasn't a Mr. in the house other wise he'd been......oh never mind....hahahahahhaaaa ...glad ya enjoyed..after all what is life w/o the spice of life "PASSION" Smiles back at ya lil' one..
Terrie* (65.148.230.166) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 12:26 am

Clive, i'm sure we will.

hahahaha... so yes my friend i will wake you up..
i promise ...your amazingly too much..
 
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