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Daddy Beauty
Author: Amy BananaHead

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I didnt write nothing in a long time because i was sick.
Being sick is fun with daddy.
We did lots of stuff.
First I taught him how to brush my hair the way muumy did.
Now it doesnt hurt.
We had a picnic in the living room,
With star and heart shaped sandwiches!
We did finger painting and got all messy
We even did face painting.
I made daddy into sleeping beauty
But i called him daddy beauty.
He made his voice sound like a girl
We laughed so much until my belly hurt.
Then we played dress-ups.
Daddy is too big for my clothes
So I wore his.
It was the BESTEST day EVER!!!
Even though I was sick.

------- Author's Notes -------

By Amy aged 7..........I love you Daddy

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.87.5) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 07:18 pm

Amy, this is AMAZING...

Princess your renarkable, this is absolutely amazing....i can just picture your eventful fun day with daddy..i would of loved to have seen that...
daddy beauty huh? that is so sweet..bet daddy loved this lots..(sorry you were ill, happy now that you feel better) keep writing i love what you write i'm your # i fan...HUGS/LOVE Always,Terrie
barb (209.112.22.133) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 09:20 pm

so nice

You had a good day with your daddy and shared your good time with us in your writing thanks. Gggood writing Amy.)))))
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Wednesday, October 13 2004, 01:07 pm

Miss Terrie and Miss Barb

thank you for reading my poem about me and daddy. i told daddy i want to be sick everyday so we can have fun but he said we can when he doesnt have to work. so now on the days i dont have school we are going to go out to the park and swimming and ice skating and to watch films. my daddy is the bestest daddy in the whole wide world all the way up to the stars and back again. i think i am a very lucky Amy.
Love Amy
barb (206.191.91.66) -- Wednesday, October 13 2004, 05:02 pm

Awe

Your writing is so refreshing to read happy thoughts,nice Amy.
Stacey (69.137.26.123) -- Thursday, October 14 2004, 01:30 pm

GREAT JOB AMY !!!

You are such a remarkable writer. Your poem made me smile and it also reminded me of the fun times i spent with my dad when i was a little girl. Please keep writing poems, i love reading them!!! :)
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Thursday, October 14 2004, 02:51 pm

Miss Stacey

thank you for reading my poem. i'm glad it made you smile.
Love Amy
joyce ivy (68.19.169.76) -- Thursday, October 14 2004, 03:00 pm

VERY PRETTY AMY

there's nothing like a fathers love...it's good to had a day with dad...very nice poem Amy...
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Saturday, October 16 2004, 07:02 pm

Miss Joyce

Thank you for reading my poem. i'm happy you liked it.
love Amy
Jenny (209.214.150.146) -- Thursday, October 21 2004, 04:37 pm

So sweet

I really enjoy your poetry Amy.....
 
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