A smell of freshness now exudes
to fill my nostrils when respired,
While hungry gardens feasts on foods
from earth, to nurture as required.
Bright flowers lift their watered heads
with pride, their brilliant colours glow
as they arouse from sleep, their beds
begin to flourish as they grow.
The greenest grass looks painted on
the scene, so bright its vivid hue
Its turf spreads under skies that don
white clouds on shades of pastel blue
The sun now shyly peeks to test
if wind has blown the rain-clouds dry,
he sees all colours have been pressed
to curve an arc into the sky.
The rainbow bends through sprinkled rain
to end without a pot of gold
Yet wealth has scattered nature's lane
it's earthly treasures to unfold
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Martin Vann (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 01:33 pm|
Great work here, life is not always full of rainbows, but as you point out, there is beauty all around, will to be shared, as we have to do, partake of it and it will be shared with us.
Beautiful and great meaning.
|barb (22.214.171.124) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 05:47 pm|
So this is what you've been writing very good cap your description is so right.
|Alpha (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 05:03 am|
Very good.. I l love it. Felt as though I was there>
|Capricorn (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 09:51 pm|
Yes Martin life is not full of rainbows, but we have to look for the beauty that is here. Thanks for your comments
|Capricorn (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 09:52 pm|
I am writing a lot of nnature poems at the moment...takes my mind off venting...Haha!!
|Capricorn (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 09:53 pm|
Thanks Alpha for your very nice comments
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