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Waste Of A Good Mind
Author: Scurrd

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His mind is a vacant sky
Nothing floating in or about
Nothing to be seen or heard
Just shadows of what once was
Great things would be seen
Flying in and out
Without plead
No one expected it to become so vacant
So desolated and dim
But then again
No one really cared
This mind lost its drive
Its purpose of going on
It found its high
And stuck to what it liked
No more great thoughts emerged again
None shall for a long time
It iz a wasted mind
In a wasted place no sign of life
Just weak people
Who cant endure strife

------- Author's Notes -------

wrote this in 15 mins
not very godd but w/e

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (172.170.63.78) -- Thursday, October 21 2004, 05:19 pm

hahahaha

15 minutes eh? LOL! It ain't bad at all Scurrd!
So his mind is cloudless eh? Nicely done!

Smiley face,
Meri
scurrd (4.26.228.115) -- Friday, October 22 2004, 03:20 am

no title

thanx for the comment :)
Lotus (24.30.122.61) -- Saturday, August 27 2005, 06:52 pm

Beat?

I like that lets put some back ground to it
 
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