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Care
Author: Simik

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within the world i drew
i never knew
people care for me...
for i always flee
so why cant i accept it?
always throwing a fit
do i like to be lonely?

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joyce ivy (68.19.179.151) -- Friday, October 22 2004, 02:54 pm

TRUE FEELINGS....SIMIK

sometimes we stay to our self,
maybe in life that is best...

away from life I did fly,
sometimes it makes me want to cry...
so from here, I withdrew..
from a life, I once knew...
throwing life away isn't fit...
but sometimes, that's how we handle it...

GREAT JOB...You can put so much feeling into so few words...love your poem...
your friend...
Joyce
 
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