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Good-bye Lulu
Author: Capricorn

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I called to see you late last night
and felt a pain deep in my heart;
to find your life had lost its light,
your spirit gone. My eyes now smart
with salty tears that cloud my sight.

Now buried in a shallow grave
you join the others gone before.
My spirit's sad, my mask is brave;
inside my heart is feeling raw,
as you are hidden in deaths' cave.

You lie in peace by leafy trees
and there I place a garden stone;
as spring time's gently drifting breeze,
will cover you with leaves it's blown.
Memories give my heart a squeeze,
I miss you now your spirit's flown.

------- Author's Notes -------

Dedicated to one of my pet Leopard Gecko's, Lulu who died last night

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.77.130) -- Tuesday, May 20 2003, 11:51 am

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its always sad to lose a love one, weather pet or family, once close it tears you apart when pulled away to meet its unwanted faith.. lovely poem cap.
Dino (67.24.230.58) -- Tuesday, May 20 2003, 10:12 pm

Nice poem about Lulu

Very nice poem about your pet Lulu Cap. Because of this poem, they will live on forever in our minds. It's good to write these poems so they aren't forgotten. It's special to you and you alone. We can only read and sympatize with your lost. With that said, you have inspired me to write one on my pet, while he is still alive. Thanks again for a very nice poem. I like the rock thing, I did that with Casper, my samoyed. I found a big rock and engraved it with a drill, the letters looking like Japanese writings, all up and down, with my own design and painted each letter. Then stood it up. I see it everyday. Did that give you any ideas?
Capricorn (62.30.218.103) -- Thursday, May 22 2003, 10:34 pm

To Luc

Thanks for your kind comments
Capricorn (62.30.218.103) -- Thursday, May 22 2003, 10:39 pm

to Dino

Thanks for your kind comments. The rock sounds great...really has got me thinking!
lil (216.28.152.111) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 06:36 am

i like

i like ure poem but its kinda weird cause thats my name too but greta poem
 
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