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Lingered In My Heart
Author: Amanda C.

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Whatever it was that you said
Whatever it was that you did
It sure got me comming back for more.
Perhaps those sweet words,
Maybe your kind gestures,
Of that I'm not sure.
I tasted your love wiht every kiss,
I felt your affection wiht every hug.
Coziness and warmth crept up insided of me,
The delicate aroma of flowers and incense tickled me senses,
Fireworks,Roller Coasters,Roses...
You tender voice echoed into my soul,
You found your way into my heart,
In there u lingered forever...

------- Author's Notes -------

(continuation...read my other poem "The Way")

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Enchantress (206.214.68.157) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 06:26 pm

Awesome!

I'm gonna read the second part to it, but this one is so good. It's so neat how you made this poem, it's so ro-man-tic. Great writing Amanda, loved this one.
 
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