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For Little One
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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This is for a little one we all know.

Letting her heart show.

So much growing to do yet.

We know as children we have our favorite pet.

Children are honest and pure of heart.

We need to listen to them from the start.

So as kids never let your heart grow up.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is a poem for Amy and other little ones.

I have never tried writing before for children, I know it's not the best but I tried for Amy and Terrie.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

cap (82.36.129.85) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 08:12 am

Lovely

Aw -- This is lovely, Barb!
joyce ivy (68.19.190.237) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 12:56 pm

lovely Barb

i'm with you...it's been harder for me to write childrens poetry..i not use to it yet...good job...
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 02:21 pm

Truth

Barb you excell again specking truth yet making it fun all I can say is WELL DONE
Terrie* (65.150.175.76) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 03:12 pm

Barb, this is absolutely beautiful...

tears flow from my eyes...... hun this is just beautiful.., Amy is gonna love it doll, YOU ARE TRUELY AMAZING.....A VERY REMARKABLE WOMAN...you have a GIFTED HEART....my words can never match up to what you have done for our Angel....


Thank you AND God Bless You...
WOW...beautiful...absolutely beautiful..
barb (209.112.24.195) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 06:19 pm

Awe shucks

Thanks everyone I hope Amy likes it do you guys think It'll be easy for her to read?
Terrie* (65.135.87.250) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 07:09 pm

Barb,a touchable/readable piece......

definintly...she will also feel the love and sweetness your heart put into it

you have an amazing heart....
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 09:05 pm

Miss Barb

sorry i havent been here in ages. i didnt forget but theres so much to do all the time.
i like your poem Miss Barb. write lots lots more!!
love Amy
barb (209.112.24.195) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 09:29 pm

Thank-you Amy

I'm glad you liked it. I'm 51 and writing this made me feel 7 again. Nice feeling, keep up your writing ok we all think its good.)))))
 
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